Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work. This year our school focus is "In Our Backyard". Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work. Thank you for taking the time to support my learning journey!
Kia Ora Samantha, what a great story! It was gripping to read and I loved the use of adjectives and other vocabulary which really made a picture in my mind! Ka pai!
I've missed reading your writing, Samantha, I guess you have been writing lots during lockdown. As Miss Fletcher said, I think the way you chose some excellent describing words here, I really like "torch swinging wildly".
Kia Ora Samantha. Wow, what great word choices you have made. Words like 'illuminates, escaping unscathed, light airy clouds'. These have helped to create an image in my mind as I read your writing. I wonder what next adventure your character will be famous for?
Kia Ora Samantha, what a great story! It was gripping to read and I loved the use of adjectives and other vocabulary which really made a picture in my mind! Ka pai!
ReplyDeleteI've missed reading your writing, Samantha, I guess you have been writing lots during lockdown. As Miss Fletcher said, I think the way you chose some excellent describing words here, I really like "torch swinging wildly".
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Samantha. Wow, what great word choices you have made. Words like 'illuminates, escaping unscathed, light airy clouds'. These have helped to create an image in my mind as I read your writing. I wonder what next adventure your character will be famous for?
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