This is my in the tunnel writing 2 , it took a long time to make! have you made one? Samantha.
It was midnight as I made my way across the soft silvery gloom of the ocean, “Ellie” my brother's cool calm voice was not more than a whisper “Look.” I turned my head to where he was pointing to none other than a beautiful great white shark swimming towards us. “Oh Isaac” I gasped, he had always wanted to see a shark up close. “It's beautiful!” Just as the word left my mouth there was a shout “Shark! Shark! Catch him Ryan! Catch him!” the word shattered the silence that had been hovering over the ocean,
There was a splash and the water around the shark rippled and the realisation of what was happening hit me like a raging bull. They were going to catch the shark! I turned just in time to see Isaac jump into the water “Isaac!” I called as I jumped in after him. Suddenly everything was a blur one second I hit water the next I was tumbling down a tunnel then I was lying on the ground with a beautiful woman shaking me the world was spinning then black.
Kia Ora Samantha. Kahvel here. What I like here about your, In The Tunnel story is that you used some really thoughtful words and what I mean about thoughtful I mean like wow words and I also like your beautiful picture it looks a lot like the galaxy.
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Thanks!
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